UA Text Feedback
From: JENNIFERJEWELL81@YAHOO.COM <JENNIFERJEWELL81@YAHOO.COM>
To: JENNIFERJEWELL81@YAHOO.COM
Cc:
Bcc: Ryan D. Walsh
Received: 03/15/05 10:51 AM
Subject: peer review of UA text
Some suggestions:
To contrast keywords and text we suggest you bold or highlight in another way key words. For example, in your second step, bolding the words, "?map? button" and "navbar" will help contrast and make these key concepts and words stand out and easier to scan.
Also if you can, use arrows to help clarify what features the user should be looking for on the screen shot as with each screen shot there are many features.
For step Five you may need to give additional information on how the "drag=link" feature works and how your users can use it. Maybe giving them a screen shot of it would help clarify this point.
Other than that you do a good job being clear and precise with your instructions and steps. Great Job!
Jennifer, Casee, Alexandria